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Hi, your question is incomplete and this makes it difficult for you to answer it. However, when searching for your question on the internet, I was able to find the full version of that question, which is the version presented in the figure attached below. In that case, I hope the answer below can help you.

The parallel structure in the sentences presented in your question is formed as follows:

We can see that this sentence has a parallel structure because the parallel structure refers to the creation of a sentence where the clauses are organized in a similar way and presenting the same grammatical structure.

The sentence shown above has the first clause assembled by the words: "Vicky does her homework carefully and efficiently," this clause shows that Vick is dedicated to something. Furthermore, "Vicky" is the subject of the sentence and is promoting the action of the verb "to do" when doing her homework.

The second clause of the sentence is "Dereck plays bass and sings backup for his band," which also shows that Dereck is working on something. As in the first clause, this clause shows "Dereck" as the subject of the sentence, which is promoting the action of the verb "to play."

It is important for you to know that in a sentence the verb is the word that indicates an action or a state of mind, while the subject is the word that indicates the individual who is promoting the action of the verb or suffering the action of the video.

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https://brainly.com/question/6279354?referrer=searchResults (Information about what parallelism is)

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“Our Beautiful Mosaic is a collaboration among Jonathan Rodriguez, Cara Lee, and fellow students at Garrison High School. “

collaboration = partnership...........

The meaning of the word collaboration is Partnership.

Collaboration is a joint activity. It refers to a form of work that is done by people who come together to execute a set goal.

So, when it is said that the individuals in the text collaborated, it means that they worked unitedly to achieve something.

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Answer:

Hope this made your day a bit better!

Explanation:

stay safe and keep living please

take care

-Ken

Explanation:

Phrases to be corrected:

-"The story revolves around the psychology of guilt and a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it."

The most concrete idea would be:

The story revolves around the psychology of a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it.

-"This article will analyze the issue of violence as it is contained in history".

It could be corrected as the following:

"This article will analyze what influenced the narrator to become a violent man and what the consequences were."

A correct punctuation must be made in the following paragraph:

"These animals included dogs, apes, and even donkeys. The theme of violence is also portrayed when the narrator, realizing his mistake, turns on himself and begins to hurt himself with the knife that he always carried with him."

The first stanza is a continuity of the idea from the previous paragraph, therefore it must be in the previous paragraph with a period followed.

In the following paragraph we can make some editorial corrections as well as punctuation:

"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. The theme of loyalty also shows up when the narrator gouges his cat's eye out. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him."

We can see in the previous paragraph that the subject of loyalty begins to be discussed, therefore it is not necessary for the writer of the essay to say again "the subject of loyalty is also shown ..." it could be said "We can quote a example when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye ".

The last paragraph, as it is a continuity of the previous paragraph where the writer continues talking about loyalty, must continue that idea in the previous paragraph with a period followed.

Therefore, there should be a single paragraph where it is not necessary to repeat the word "the issue of loyalty" but only leave the word "loyalty" because it is already known that that issue has been discussed. Therefore, they could be as follows:

"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. An example we can cite is when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him, and loyalty is represented by the cat himself. After the narrator gouged out the cat's eye, the cat was still playing with the narrator after the pierced eye sock had healed. Under normal circumstances, the cat would have fled the house and moved to another house away from the brutality."

Answer:

(The essay I used is underneath the last question)

1. Where does the writer stray from the topic? What could be done to fix this problem? Explain what you would cut and cross it out in the text of the essay.

I do not believe MuffinAlien strays away from the gothic topic in her essay. I think she did a great job describing Edgar Allen Poe's writing.
2. What misunderstandings or inaccuracies involving Gothic literature or Poe's use of suspense do you see? How would you suggest eliminating this problem? If necessary, cross out some words within the text of the essay.

I do not think there are any misunderstandings or inaccuracies in gothic writing, Poe's story, or the essay that MuffinAlien wrote. However, I will say I do have a small opinion. When writing a gothic based story, or maybe even any story depending on who you ask, people use more complex words, making sentences longer to make it seem like time is moving slowly in the story. I do not think it's effective for what it's for. This may be very biased because it's my personal opinion, but it makes it harder for me to understand the plot of the story. Instead of making the story more interesting because the time is being slowed, it makes it more boring because the time is too slow, and then I'm not interested in reading anymore. This is the reason why I do not enjoy gothic stories.

3. Where does the writer fail to support her points with evidence? What evidence from the story would you suggest adding to support these points?

MuffinAlien doesn't fail to support her points with evidence. Every example MuffinAlien told, she gave a quote to go with it.

4. Read the essay again and edit it for errors. Find and fix as many spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors as you can. Pay special attention to the errors you learned about in the lesson, but look for other types of errors as well. You may write your edits directly into the essay.

I do not believe that there is anything wrong with the essay MuffinAlien wrote, but i suppose i wouldn't get a good grade if i didn't do much on this essay, so i'll try my best to fix it somehow.

Gothic writing is marked by the suspense of not knowing what will happen next in a story. Great Gothic writers like Edgar Allan Poe move beyond simple techniques to build suspense. His stories are more than the usual "It was a dark and stormy night." In his popular Gothic story, "The Black Cat," you can see Poe effectively using clear narrative choices to build suspense. How he holds back information and controlled pacing develops the narrator's character are both two good examples of how he does it.

Holding back information is the first way Poe builds suspense. As the story begins, the narrator is clearly addressing an audience. He says it in a way as if he knows us already. It says at the very beginning of the story, "But to-morrow I die, and to-day I will empty my soul." This statement is so extreme that anyone who would stumble onto these words would be attached, wondering what's going to happen next. None of the questions flowing through the reader's mind are answered until much later in the story. The now-curious reader must read along.

Along with this, Poe effectively controls the pacing of the story to which also builds suspense. Whenever the action becomes intense and the narrator becomes excited or violent, the sentences are either short or very choppy. For example, “...They left no nook or corner unexplored. At length, for the third or fourth time, they descended into the cellar. I trembled not in a muscle. My heart beats calmly as that of one who slumbers in innocence…” These sentences are short, direct, and choppy, creating more suspension. When Poe wants to create the illusion that time is passing more slowly; he uses longer and more complex sentences that must be read more carefully and slowly. For example, “To those who have cherished an affection for a faithful and wise dog, I need hardly be at the trouble of explaining the nature or the intensity of the satisfaction, therefore available. There is something in the unselfish and self-sacrificing love of a savage, which goes directly to the heart of him who has had frequent occasions to test the small friendship and cobweb loyalty of basic Man.” These sentences are very long, showing that time is passing very slowly.

Poe creates suspense in the story by using more complex tools and narrative choices than just setting the story on a stormy night in a haunted house or middle age castle. He holds back information and carefully controls the pacing. These narrative choices are so effective that we're still reading Poe's stories more than 150 years after they were first published.

Explanation:

This is what I wrote :)

I got this essay from another user on Brainly named MuffinAlien. She posted her essay under a different question, but it was the same topic.

Thank you MuffinAlien <3

Answer:

The answer is C. problem/solution

Answer:

a

Explanation:

Answer:b

Explanation:

Answer:

1. c

2. d

3. b

Explanation:

These sentences would make the most sense.

Answer:

Cleaning is needed for my shoes

Explanation:

i hope it is correct

Answer:

The figurative language used in the excerpt is:

foreshadowing

Explanation:

This excerpt was taken from the short story "To Build a Fire" by American novelist Jack London (1876-1926). London is famous for writing stories in which the conflict man vs. nature is developed. He used his own experience as an adventurer as inspiration for his plots.

This particular passage of "To Build a Fire" uses a figurative language known as foreshadowing, in which the author reveals details that will later unfold into something important in the story. Here, the main character has been warned by an old man about the dangers of extreme cold weather. The old man is most likely much wiser than the young main character. However, he does not listen to him and go out into the forest on his own. This will later unfold into the young man's death. The old man's warning served as foreshadowing for that happening.

Answer:

1.b

Explanation:

Answer:

In grammar, the term particle (abbreviated PTCL) has a traditional meaning, as a part of speech that cannot be inflected, and a modern meaning, as a function word associated with another word or phrase to impart meaning. ... Many languages use particles, in varying amounts and for varying reasons.

Answer:

The answer is probably in.

Explanation:

Answer:

The third option. My father, a huge baseball fan, taught me to throw when I was three,

Explanation:

It is correct because it renames the noun (my father) next to it.

Answer: i believe the answer is the third option.

"My father, a huge basketball fan, taught me to throw hen i was three"

Explanation:

A. The huge crowd listened intently and clapped enthusiastically when the musicians bowed.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

The iPod does not make phone calls.

Answer:

Casablanca is also a political allegory of World War II. Rick Blaine represents the United States, which initially insisted that it should be neutral in World War II. However, when the United States was bombed at Pearl Harbor, it had no choice but to get involved

Explanation:

The people in this part of the city live in extreme poorness

Answer : Poverty

Explanation:

Answer:

D. left

He left the train ticket at home.

Explanation:

means he left the train ticket at home.

Answer:

D.) left

Explanation:

He took the train ticket at home- doesn't sound right

He put the train ticket at home- still doesn't right

He brought the train ticket at home- now those are two different things

He left the train ticket at home- makes sense now

Explanation:

You never listen to a word I say ,you will always listen to that mp3 player

Answer:

You never listen to a word I say! You are always listening to that mp3 players.

Explanation:

We can use 'always' in Present continuous if that happens repeatedly and make you annoyed or upset.

Answer:

D. Presenting your findings in a clear, organized way.

Explanation:

This involves presentation and not research. Hence, it is not considered a key research skill.

The one that is not a key to research skill is option D. Presenting your findings in a clear, organized way.

Researchers have to build a friendly relationship with the target people to collect research data. So, the researcher must be efficient in communication to operate research works effectively.

A good researcher must be able to manage the entire research project. Because researches are projects.

A researcher must have a good idea about how to get the best results from other co-workers. Otherwise, the research team will be in vain.

Information technology, which is the most important thing for researchers, needs to operate research projects, maintenance, analysis, and almost all types of work.

This is the power to enhance your ability as a researcher. You should analyze your research works. You need to analyze how good is your research, how relevant, how practical, etc.

Self-assessment is another essential key to being a successful researcher. If you can assess yourself, then you will be able to find out your lacks and weaknesses.

It’s not just a researcher but you have to learn how to be humble step by step. You might make mistakes in each step, and for those mistakes, people will criticize you severely. Because you will learn from your mistakes.

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Answer:

on

Explanation:

On" is used to indicate position, usually indicating that something is on top of something else. We might say, “My journal is on the desk.” In this function, “on” typically denotes proximity or position. Another example would be, “He sat on the stone wall.”

The missing words are:

A) auxiliary scientific, educational, and cultural

B) users

C) institution

D) sell them

E) Public

F) Convert

G) One

H) Information

I) into

J) Create the

A modern library, with some exceptions, is regarded as an auxiliary scientific, educational, and cultural institution. Its aim is to enable the users to make the most effective use of the resources and services of the institution.

This type of library acquires materials, processes them, and makes them available for use rather than sell them. It allows the open public to its collection and provides services to its users.

It is expected to convert potential users into habitual users. A habitual user is one who goes to a library regularly and uses the library as a source of information. In order to convert potential users into habitual users, it is essential to create the desired kind of contact between the user and the document.

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Answer:

I think he's a social freak with children

Answer:

Nam said to me that he would join the army the following month.

Explanation:

Required

Complete the gap

"The following month" means the event is yet to happen.

To complete the gap, we make use of a verb that illustrates an event that is yet to happen.

To do this, we have:

will join

would join

.....as possible options.

However, the verb after immediate the subject (i.e. said) is in the past.

Hence, the correct option to complete the blank is "would join"

The bridge designed by french architects is very nice