Which revision would best help the author support the thesis more effectively?

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Answer 1

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The author should explain how Rapunzel’s story fits into the thesis.


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Read the excerpt from "The Most Dangerous Game."

"Where there are pistol shots, there are men. Where there are men, there is food," he thought. But what kind of men, he wondered, in so forbidding a place? An unbroken front of snarled and ragged jungle fringed the shore.

He saw no sign of a trail through the closely knit web of weeds and trees; it was easier to go along the shore, and Rainsford floundered along by the water. Not far from where he had landed, he stopped.

Some wounded thing, by the evidence a large animal, had thrashed about in the underbrush; the jungle weeds were crushed down and the moss was lacerated; one patch of weeds was stained crimson. A small, glittering object not far away caught Rainsford's eye and he picked it up. It was an empty cartridge.

Which details from the narration show that Rainsford is an experienced hunter and outdoor enthusiast? Select 3 options.

But what kind of men, he wondered, in so forbidding a place.
An unbroken front of snarled and ragged jungle fringed the shore.
Some wounded thing, by the evidence a large animal, had thrashed about in the underbrush;
the jungle weeds were crushed down and the moss was lacerated; one patch of weeds was stained crimson
A small, glittering object not far away caught Rainsford's eye and he picked it up. It was an empty cartridge.

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A small, glittering object not far away caught Rainsford's eye and he picked it up. It was an empty cartridge.

I need a thank you and goodbye letter for my teacher. I would like to thank him for the time given to us and for the fact that he helped us a lot this school year, despite the pandemic and the online school. I want to thank her for the beautiful moments. My teacher changed school next year and I have to say goodbye. I really need help, I don't know how to express myself or formulate sentences that have any impact on a person.
It needs to be 2 written pages long.

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Answer:

p/s: first of all, my English isn't my mother tongue, I might step on some rocks but here I'm trying my best. besides, you can add additional things I say. i dont think I can dk 2 pages long since I always keep myself short but meaningful, plus I dont know what your teacher like

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Dear Mr.Mrs...!

I know you're going to move soon and I hope you have best of luck with moving and settling down in the new place. You will be miss by me and everyone, I won't forget what you've done for us and all the heartwarming moment in class (name all the events that your teacher did that you think is beautiful). I enjoy your class out of the most, every time you share a story of your life, teaching us new things, give advices to us like a father/mother and so much love.

You're more than just a teacher, you're a friend to us, a beautiful person with beautiful soul, I hope you know that.

you mean a lot to me and you change how I am with a brighter hope and bravery. You give us your happiness and your humour, I appreciate it.

Again, words can't express how thankful I am, and I hope you will have a new, with excitement I your new chapter life!

p/s: please add more to my paragraph, I know it's short and not long, but adding details would increase the length, though personally I won't want to keep it that long.

have a good day! :)

1. This exam was easier/ more easy than old one.
2. Vung Tau is boreder/ more bored than Nha Trang.
3. She is prettier/ more pretty than Nina.
4. She is lazier/ more lazy than I am.
5. The well is deeper/ more deep than I think.
6. I love this bag because it is comfortabler/ more comfortable.
7. This film is boringer/ more boring than I expect.
8. He is taller/ more tall than I am.
9. Bikes are cheaper/ more cheap than cars.
10. January is colder/ more cold than June.

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1. easier
2. more bored
3. prettier
4. lazier
5. deeper
6. more comfortable
7.more boring
8. taller
9. cheaper
10. colder

How did Tom manage his life when he ran out of money at first?​

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Answer:

He made a steady income from his friends when he ran out of money at first.

Circle the correct words.

1.A/ The / - North Pole is located in the middle of the Arctic Ocean.
2.He can speak many languages, but he can't speak the / - / an Arabic.
3.It's very important to eat - /a/ the breakfast in the morning.
4.I don't know why - /a/ the people like ice climbing. It's very dangerous. 5.There is a volcano on the island. A/ - / The volcano is not active.
6. Bill is a /an/ the architect who built that modern hotel.
7. It was his dream to go to a / the / - Himalayas.
8.They didn't go by a / - / the bus. They used their car.
9. Hopefully, an / - / the environment will be saved from any more damage. 10.Nowadays, the /a/ - computers help significantly with scientific research. ​

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Answer:

1.the

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4./-/

5.the

6.the

7.the

8.the

9.the

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Why were the Lotus Eaters dangerous for Odysseus' men?

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In the land of the lotus-eaters there were lotus flowers that poisoned the mind. Once the lotus leaves were eaten, you were addicted to it and would lose your mind and your will to do anything else. Odysseus dragged the three men back to the ship and tied them down, warning no one else to eat the lotus.

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In the land of the lotus-eaters there were lotus flowers that poisoned the mind. Once the lotus leaves were eaten, you were addicted to it and would lose your mind and your will to do anything else. Odysseus dragged the three men back to the ship and tied them down, warning no one else to eat the lotus.

Explanation:

we should ----------- low energy light bulbs

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Answer:

use

Explanation:

We should use low energy light bulbs

Discusses the elements of persuasion and the forms of persuasion and group influence principles that are harnessed by new religious movements.

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Answer:

There are several elements of persuasion and principles of group influence that can be used by new religious movements, as they want to get more people to adhere to that philosophy.

Some elements that can be used by these individuals is the use of assertive communication, with a strong emotional argument that can move the audience and bring identification.

The principles of group influence also greatly influence individuals to adhere to a new idea or concept, using the authority of a leader to share their ideas, reciprocity, the ability to integrate into a group, consistency, trust, etc.

If you were the leader in a group and one of your group-mates told you, “I feel like we are stuck, and I don’t know what to do”, what could be a question you could ask to guide him or her to figuring out an independent way to tackle that obstacle?


two or more questions you would ask

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I would find a way to do my best

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ask what the obstacle is, you could also ask in which area they are stuck in.

Did you wait for him very long ? Yes. I … to bed until 12:00 p.m
A . Went
B . Did go
C . Had gone
D . Did not go

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Answer:

C. Did not go

Explanation:

your tense is in the past, so it has to remain the same

what do you mean by compound sentence? Explain.​

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Answer:

A compound sentence is a sentence that connects two independent clauses, typically with a coordinating conjunction like and or but. They're best for combining two or more self-sufficient and related sentences into a single, unified one.

Explanation:

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In an online article, how do journalists sometimes cite their sources?
A) Using hyperlinks
B) Adding a bibliography
C) Including a picture of the source
D) They do not cite sources in online articles

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It’s the letter A because a bibliography is of someone’s published work

3. _________ , he doesn't study well. A. As clever he is B. He is as clever C. Clever as he is D. As he is clever

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Answer:

The answer to this is... C

Explanation:

Answer:

C. clever as he is......

In collecting mrs. wright’s clothes , mrs hale observes

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Answer:

What's the name of the book?

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What did Jim share with Hans?​

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Answer:

Hans Wolf and Jim Macpherson shared the cake Connie had baked. They talked about Bathsheba, Gabriel Oak, Sergeant Troy and Dorset. They even talked about the books they liked. They agreed about everything.

Write the summary of " rich dad poor dad "

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Answer:  Rich Dad Poor Dad is about Robert Kiyosaki and his two dads—his real father (poor dad) and the father of his best friend (rich dad)—and the ways in which both men shaped his thoughts about money and investing. You don’t need to earn a high income to be rich. Rich people make money work for them. The poor and the middle-class work for money.

Answer:

The overarching theme of Rich Dad Poor Dad is how to use money as a tool for wealth development. It destroys the myth that the rich are born rich, explains why your personal residence may not really be an asset, describes the real difference between an asset and a liability, and much more

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Question 1. Give 3 utterances including hedges and explain which Gricean Maxims the speakers violate in each utterance.

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Answer:

There were more or less 100 people at the theater.

In short, we broke up.

I assume he´s not coming.

Explanation:

The Hedges are in bold.

The Gricean Maxims are:

Maxim of Quantity: a contribution should be as informative as necessary for the exchange.

Maxim of quality: do not say what you believe to be false or something of which you lack adequate evidence.

Maxim of relation: provide only relevant information.

Maxim of manner: avoid vagueness and ambiguity, be brief and orderly.

The first two sentences infringe the Maxim of Quantity because the hedges reflect a lack of detail in the information provided, meaning that information necessary for the exchange is missing.

The third sentence infringes the Maxim of quality because an assumption is information based on no evidence.

Madam Rides the Busfocuses on Valli's experience as she travels by a bus alone. How do you think a young girl of ten may prepare herself before she undertakes a bus journey all on her own? Answer the question by takingyour cues from the text

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Hi. You did not submit any text hints. However, I will try to help you answer this question as best I can.

The best way a ten-year-old girl can prepare to travel alone is to make a list of everything she will need for the trip, before the day of the trip. This girl can make this list using paper and pen, or her cell phone. The important thing is that she writes down the travel schedule and writes down everything she will take in her suitcase and everything she will need on the day of the trip, such as money, documents, water, among other things.

It is important that this girl ask for help from someone older and more experienced in travel, who helps her to organize and give her tips on how to have a smooth trip without major problems.

Is there _____ milk in the fridge?
any
some
a
much

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I believe the correct answer is any because it is the only choice that would make sense.

Hope this helps!

Have a great day!

Answer:is there any milk in the fridge

Explanation: because any is used when asking questions

list any five reasons behind the popularity of English language​

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Answer:

Sorry if this is multiple choice, but I have some answers!

Explanation:

-The British Empire conquered about a quarter of the planet while in their prime, so naturally they had brought their language with them.

-Post War in the U.S started a boom in international trade, making the language even more necessary to know to trade goods.

-There is a certain hip/coolness factor to other countries with the way English can be spoken, especially since most movies and popular media are based in English due to Hollywood's infamy.

-The internet and other modern electronics were invented within America as well as the most hardware coming from the same place and using the Latin alphabet, along with major scientific leads being documented in the same language.

-English only really can grow in popularity as people who don't already speak it gain some sort of interest in visiting English speaking countries, who desire to consume English media, it evolves and changes with time so the possibility of it going out of style is scarce.

(Hope this helps!^^)

Choose the word or phrase that best completes the sentence.

I enjoy watching snowboarding and ice skating in the Winter Olympics; __________, the Summer Games aren't as entertaining.



that being said
by the same token
similarly
because

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Answer:

that being said would be a more appropriate answer because it makes the sentence independent

I enjoy watching snowboarding and ice skating in the Winter Olympics; [because] the Summer Games aren’t as entertaining

we have a test today
i wish .......

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Answer:

I wish you good luck and success. ):

I wish u can pass the test and it upgrades your grade :)

Hamadi 1.what is the problem the protagonist faces?

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In this story, both main character´s father and her friend Hamadi come for a region turn by conflict. Hamadi is from Lebanon, a country devastated by a 16-year civil war.

mary stopped doing yogga five months ago

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What is the question?
Huhhhh? I’m confused

In what 3 ways does Whitman’s poem match the time in which he was writing?

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Answer:

option a,b,d

..........

Revision is a process done____
a.only when required by an editor
b.in the same way by all writers
c.to correct and polish
d.only to remove errors

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C, I’m almost certain.

which statement best describes the similarity between these excerpts​

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Answer:

which experts

Explanation:

complete your question

Correctly rewrite each of these sentences:

Even though my test was almost finished.
People who like TV.
We did not finish the work, we were paid anyway.
I really like reading, it relaxes me.
I wanted to see the whole story it was very exciting.
Tom walked everywhere when he visited New York City there was no place left unseen.

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Answer:

Know that there are MANY ways*  to "correct" these sentences, e.g., ....           *  adding, deleting, changing punctuation

*  adding, deleting, changing clause order

*  adding, deleting, changing clause content

*  adding, deleting, changing clause conjunctions/conjunctive adverbs

I simply have chosen the method that first popped into my head.

Even though my test was almost finished, I tore it up and left the testing room.

People who like TV often spend up to 8 hours per day watching it.

We did not finish the work, but we were paid anyway.

I really like reading; it relaxes me.

I wanted to see the whole story. It was very exciting.

Because Tom walked everywhere when he visited New York City, there was no place left unseen.

Explanation:

how are ponyboy and sodapop alike?
Please give me two ways they are alike!!

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Ponyboy is similar to Sodapop because they are both sympathetic individuals who have likable personalities. Also, Pony and Sodapop are tough kids who have experienced tragedy throughout life.

How many times have I told you ... football in the street?

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I think it's not to play, I could be wrong

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