Revise the following email so that it demonstrates formal English.

what up, lil bro? how u been? we should totes try 2 get a ride to da mall next week n then do sumthin nice 4 mom her birthday is like next week??? lmk what you think we shud get her…flowers n stuff like that is sooooo boring. Luv ya, Sis

Answer:

Hello, little brother. How are you doing? I think that we should ask someone if they could drop us off at the mall next week, and then make a commitment to doing something nice for her. Her birthday is around next week, is it not? In my opinion, we should get her something sentimental. What do you think we should get her? I feel like flowers and traditional presents is bland. I love you, little sister.

Explanation:Hope this helps.

Answer:

Hey! What's up Brother! How have you been? we should try to get a ride to the local mall next week to do something nice for mom because her birthday is like next week. Let me know what you think we should get her... Flowers and cliche things like that are boring so we should get something else.

Love you,

Your big sister

What is a prefix for the word inhabited?

Practice reading the following excerpt for fluency and give a summary of the intended meaning of the paragraph:

Joe Traynor is a California bee broker. From a small office in a quiet side street in downtown Bakersfield, on the southern tip of Central Valley, he runs a lucrative business matching almond growers with beekeepers. I put to him that surely all this moving around of bees, confined to their hives for long periods, must be stressful for them. He admits that too much travel is not good for their health: "When you're trucking bees, they need sleep, just as humans do, and the bumping around in the truck for two to three days keeps them awake, and this lowers their resistance to pests and disease."

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Expand the following sentence by adding your own choice of adjectives or adverbs. Write the expanded sentence in the paragraph box.

The man trudged home from a day at work.

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Read the following excerpt from "Woman Who Helped Hide Anne Frank Dies at 100" by Teri Schultz.

The diary of Anne Frank is a legacy Miep Gies gave not just to Otto Frank, but to the world. It's been translated into some 65 languages and remains one of the best read books internationally. To the end of her century of life, Gies said she thought with sadness every day about the friends she had lost.
On her website she wrote it was her greatest sorrow that she and the others had been unable to save Anne, but she was pleased they'd been able to give the young woman two more years of life, and in that period Gies noted, Anne had written the diary with her message of tolerance and understanding.

What is the purpose of this excerpt?

A) to honor Miep Gies and share her history with the audience
B) to tell an interesting story and encourage people to help others
C) to preserve the memory of Anne Frank and advocate tolerance
D) to promote doing the right thing and remember the Holocaust

Does Anybody understand?

Please help? This is the last question on my quiz and I'm stuck!

Read the statement: I have gotten poison oak every time I have cut through that field on my way to school. Which is a step you would not follow to draw a conclusion from this statement?

A - Determine whether the evidence is supported logically.

B - Determine whether there is concrete evidence. Determine whether any facts , data, or other specific information supports the claim.

C - Ask yourself whether you really believe this could happen; your opinion matters most when evaluating evidence.

D - Develop inferences based on information only after determining that it is logical and concrete.

How can interpreting an author’s information into your own words help your audience understand your topic?

In a persuasive text, how are reasons connected to evidence?(1 point)

Evidence is used to back up reasons.

Evidence is used to assert that a reason is true.

Reasons are used to explain why evidence might be wrong.

Reasons are used to justify evidence.

According to the article "Clemente's Impact Wanes in Puerto Rico 40 Years after His Death" what begins after Clemente's sports city is established?

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Today you will begin to write your own story. You will have two days (in class) to work on this assignment. Use the texts from the past weeks as models of writing to write your own story (2 pages) in which characters take bold actions in the face of a seemingly overwhelming challenge.

Must Include:

title

author = you

descriptive setting

a character that faces an overwhelming challenge and takes bold actions

character descriptions

Start typing your story below. Be creative!

Read this excerpt from "The Tell-Tale Heart" by Edgar Allan Poe.

It was open—wide, wide open—and I grew furious as I gazed upon it.

How does this incident provoke the narrator's decision to murder the old man?


The old man has awakened the narrator, enraging him.

The sight of the old man's glassy eye fills the narrator with revulsion.

The narrator is angry because the old man can see him.

The narrator feels nothing but contempt for the old man's fear.

Read the passage. First identify the text structure used in the passage, and then explain how this structure helps develop the writer's central idea. Use evidence from the text in your response.

Passage
The rise in popularity of farmers' markets has caused many people to rethink their use of regular grocery stores. Both have their advantages and disadvantages. Farmers' markets have fresh and local produce, and often you get a chance to meet the people who grow your food. This isn't the case with grocery stores, where you'll never get to meet the farmers. Grocery stores are starting to have more local products, though, and they have a better variety of goods. Another thing to consider is the setting itself. Farmers' markets are usually in more pleasant, open-air locations where there's often live music playing. Grocery stores, on the other hand, can be busy and uncomfortable if you don't like shopping. The pleasant atmosphere comes at a price, though, as your bill at a farmers' market is likely to be 25 percent more than at a grocery store. All in all, the freshness and quality of food is worth a little more money. Farmers' markets are the way to go.

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Read the excerpt from “A Journey West.”

It was all my fault. I'm the one who told Momma and Daddy that we should travel west. I saw the handbills, which said there was good land in Kansas. I heard a man say that if we could live on the land and improve it, we'd own it, which is not something a black family can do in Louisiana.

The man said that the people going to Kansas were like the slaves leaving Egypt in the biblical Exodus. He said we should all raise some dust and make our own exodus, out of the injustice of the South and into the freedom of the West! Well, my mind filled up with so many dreams and beautiful visions that I just about ran home to tell my folks.

The story’s first-person point of view tells the reader

how hard it was for the enslaved people to escape Egypt.
how to farm land that was available in Kansas.
about Nate’s thoughts when he discovers that land is available in Kansas.
about Nate’s parents and their hopes of escaping the injustices of the South.

At the end of the story, the author asks many questions that he doesn’t answer. He does this because he wants readers to

Which is the best use of the transitional phrase “as a result”?

Being a bully’s target is traumatizing. As a result, most kids who are bullied never report it to their teachers or parents.
As a result, most bullies have reasons for their behavior, it still is unacceptable to terrorize other individuals.

Bullies come from a variety of different backgrounds. As a result, many bullies report that they have been bullied in the past.

Victims of bullying find themselves under immense stress. As a result, many of them experience anxiety and depression.

How does Tiananmen Square experience affect the way the narrators mother lives her life?

A. It causes her to follow the rules in an attempt to say safe.

B.It causes her to speak out and use her anger to fight against injustice.

C. It causes her to want to give her own child the freedom she did not have.

D.It causes her to honor the friends she lost by sharing their story of courage.


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Read the excerpt from "Damon and Pythias.''



Narrator: When Pythias was brought before the king, he showed no fear. He stood straight and quiet before the throne.


King: (Hard, cruel) So, Pythias! They tell me you do not approve of the laws I make.


Pythias: I am not alone, your majesty, in thinking your laws are cruel. But you rule the people with such an iron hand that they dare not complain.


King: (Angry) But you have the daring to complain for them! Have they appointed you their champion?


Pythias: No, your majesty. I speak for myself alone. I have no wish to make trouble for anyone. But I am not afraid to tell you that the people are suffering under your rule. They want to have a voice in making the laws for themselves. You do not allow them to speak up for themselves.


King: In other words, you are calling me a tyrant! Well, you shall learn for yourself how a tyrant treats a rebel! Soldier! Throw this man into prison!


Which detail best supports the inference that the king is afraid that his people will rise up against him?


A. "In other words, you are calling me a tyrant!"

B. "They tell me you do not approve of the laws I make."

C. "Well, you shall learn for yourself how a tyrant treats a rebel!"

D. "Have they appointed you their champion?"


PLZ HELP ASAP

Which word or phrase best describes Bilbo baggins at the the beginning of The Hobbit
A. adventurous
B. disliked good food
C. Well-respected
D.cautious

Part B

Which evidence from the text best supports the answer to Part A?


A."...scientists can use radioactivity to determine the age of fossils."

B."But Marie and Pierre refused to charge a penny for their discovery."

C."Marie spent many hours boiling down pitchblende in enormous pots...gasping and coughing from the fumes."

D."[Pierre] discovered that radium could kill cancer cells."

You will choose another character from the story to write a diary entry about Anne.
You know what Anne thinks of the others, but what do they think of her?
Guidelines: -Written from the perspective of anyone else living in the Annex, except Anne* *(You can choose Mr. Frank, Mrs. Frank, Margot Frank, Peter Van Dann, Mrs. Van Daan, Mr. Van Daan, Mr. Dussel). -At least 8 sentences long- minimum -Include details about Anne that have been discussed in the play -written in the first-person point of view -Be sure to SIGN your character's name at the end of the diary entry so I know who you are!

What should your pace reveal as you read?

clauses
expression
speed
accuracy

When considering the connotative meanings of a word, a reader must _____.

Try to ignore the context in which the word is presented.
Focus primarily on the explicit meaning of the word.
Remember words have different connotations to different people.
Look up the connotative definition.

Can someone correctly grammar this paragraph


The major solution to this problem is to cut down on pollution. The reason for this is so the jellyfish have nothing to feed on, The reason for these swarms and clogging is because the jellyfish feed on the trash and pollution. These fish are a threat to our economy and are a danger to humans and animals. The jellyfish solution should be started immediately.

What does the reader know that juanita does not know?

1. Roughly what proportion of the world's population is fluent or competent in English?
(a) one person in 1,000
(b) one in a 100
(c) one in 10
(d) one in four

Retype these sentences, making them smoother by changing the parts that are italicized.

1. Due to the fact that I failed my last test, I need to study in order to raise my grade in history.

2. I like ice cream equally as well as I like frozen yogurt bars.

3. If and when the team wins the championship, we will have a celebration.

4. Danny skipped the second grade with the result that he is now the youngest member of our class.

which sentence correctly uses an appositive phrase
A.My Father waved as he dropped us off at school
B. My father, a huge baseball fan, taught me how to throw when I was 3
C My father likes to spend saturdays watching the game, with the dog, at his feet.
D. Despite the stress, my father took us out to lunch that weekend.

If u have read chapter 3 of animal farm can u plz help me with these questions.

PLS revise and grammaratize asap pls

Have you ever thought jellyfish were bad? Imagine a swarm of jellyfish came at you. What would you do? Jellyfish are becoming a concern; they are swarming fishing nets and affecting power plant pipes. These fish have reduced the number of fish and are clogging power plant pipes. These fish pose a threat to our economy, what will we do about it?



The jellyfish has ruined fish harvesting and drastically decreased fish numbers. The jellyfish have affected the fish population and ruined the power plants. The jellyfish sting and harm the fish, so they are swarming the fish away. The jellyfish continue to clog the pipes in the power plants, so they are forced to shut down the plant.



The fish have caused many problems for fishers and for power plant workers. The fish are dangerous and are becoming the pests of the ocean. The solution to some of these problems are to use some extra precaution and smaller nets. These fish are a harmful and pesty problem for today's Economy. The workers should not be the people to worry about the jellyfish.



The major solution to this problem is to cut down on pollution. The reason for this is so the jellyfish have nothing to feed on. The reason for these swarms and clogging is because the jellyfish feed on the trash and pollution. These fish are a threat to our economy and are a danger to humans and animals. The jellyfish solution should be started immediately.



The jellyfish problem should be solved soon because if it doesn’t the jellyfish will take over. The jellyfish could continue to harm the fish and clog the power plant pipes. The problem will continue if we don’t do anything about it. Jellyfish are an example of the economy's many large problems, will this problem end the same?

Scrooge does not want to support the poor. What does his reaction say about his character?
A) He is happy with his life and wants to be more involved in the community.
B) He does not believe the poor need anything from him.
C) He is greedy and refuses to spend his money.