Read the paragraph. (1) Outside, the snow hit the ground with a faint tapping; inside, the heater came on with a distant roar. (2) Outside, the wind howled through the big oak; a log snapped in the fireplace. (3) Outside, footsteps crunched hurriedly past the window; inside, the cat stretched and purred. (4) In the night, an owl hooted; in the room, a page turned. What revision should be made to maintain parallel structure

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Answer 1

Answer:

B)  Sentence 2 should be revised to read, "Outside, the wind howled through the big oak; inside, a log snapped in the fireplace."

Explanation:

If you add "inside" to the second sentence, it will have the same parallel as "outside."When two or more ideas are balanced in a phrase or clause, the grammar form is called "parallel." This makes it easy for the reader to keep up with what is going on and not have to try to figure out what is happening.

Original Question:

Read the paragraph.

(1) Outside, the snow hit the ground with a faint tapping; inside, the heater came on with a distant roar. (2) Outside, the wind howled through the big oak; a log snapped in the fireplace. (3) Outside, footsteps crunched hurriedly past the window; inside, the cat stretched and purred. (4) In the night, an owl hooted; in the room, a page turned.

What revision should be made to maintain parallel structure?

a) Sentence 1 should be revised to read, "Outside the snow fell; inside the heater came on with a distant roar."

b) Sentence 2 should be revised to read, "Outside, the wind howled through the big oak; inside, a log snapped in the fireplace."

c) Sentence 3 should be revised to read, "Outside, footsteps walked hurriedly past the window; inside, the cat stretched and purred."

d) Sentence 4 should be revised to read, "In the night, an owl hooted; in the room, a page turned."


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Ridicule is used to show the gullibility of the Russian citizens.

Explanation:

It is not "personification is used to show the reader Stalin's thoughts and feelings" because the thoughts are Clover's, who, in this allegory does not represent Stalin.

It is not "parody is used to illustrate the impact of Stalin's purge, because the question asks for the use of "satire". The definition of satire is the use of humor, irony, exaggeration, or ridicule to expose and criticize people's [lack of intelligence] or vices, particularly in the context of contemporary politics and other topical issues. Thus, even though Animal Farm is an allegory to the Russian situation and this paragraph refers to Stalin's purge, satire is not used to support this allegory (or, not by parody at least).

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