Explanation:
Phrases to be corrected:
-"The story revolves around the psychology of guilt and a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it."
The most concrete idea would be:
The story revolves around the psychology of a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it.
-"This article will analyze the issue of violence as it is contained in history".
It could be corrected as the following:
"This article will analyze what influenced the narrator to become a violent man and what the consequences were."
A correct punctuation must be made in the following paragraph:
"These animals included dogs, apes, and even donkeys. The theme of violence is also portrayed when the narrator, realizing his mistake, turns on himself and begins to hurt himself with the knife that he always carried with him."
The first stanza is a continuity of the idea from the previous paragraph, therefore it must be in the previous paragraph with a period followed.
In the following paragraph we can make some editorial corrections as well as punctuation:
"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. The theme of loyalty also shows up when the narrator gouges his cat's eye out. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him."
We can see in the previous paragraph that the subject of loyalty begins to be discussed, therefore it is not necessary for the writer of the essay to say again "the subject of loyalty is also shown ..." it could be said "We can quote a example when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye ".
The last paragraph, as it is a continuity of the previous paragraph where the writer continues talking about loyalty, must continue that idea in the previous paragraph with a period followed.
Therefore, there should be a single paragraph where it is not necessary to repeat the word "the issue of loyalty" but only leave the word "loyalty" because it is already known that that issue has been discussed. Therefore, they could be as follows:
"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. An example we can cite is when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him, and loyalty is represented by the cat himself. After the narrator gouged out the cat's eye, the cat was still playing with the narrator after the pierced eye sock had healed. Under normal circumstances, the cat would have fled the house and moved to another house away from the brutality."
Answer:
(The essay I used is underneath the last question)
1. Where does the writer stray from the topic? What could be done to fix this problem? Explain what you would cut and cross it out in the text of the essay.
I do not believe MuffinAlien strays away from the gothic topic in her essay. I think she did a great job describing Edgar Allen Poe's writing.
2. What misunderstandings or inaccuracies involving Gothic literature or Poe's use of suspense do you see? How would you suggest eliminating this problem? If necessary, cross out some words within the text of the essay.
I do not think there are any misunderstandings or inaccuracies in gothic writing, Poe's story, or the essay that MuffinAlien wrote. However, I will say I do have a small opinion. When writing a gothic based story, or maybe even any story depending on who you ask, people use more complex words, making sentences longer to make it seem like time is moving slowly in the story. I do not think it's effective for what it's for. This may be very biased because it's my personal opinion, but it makes it harder for me to understand the plot of the story. Instead of making the story more interesting because the time is being slowed, it makes it more boring because the time is too slow, and then I'm not interested in reading anymore. This is the reason why I do not enjoy gothic stories.
3. Where does the writer fail to support her points with evidence? What evidence from the story would you suggest adding to support these points?
MuffinAlien doesn't fail to support her points with evidence. Every example MuffinAlien told, she gave a quote to go with it.
4. Read the essay again and edit it for errors. Find and fix as many spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors as you can. Pay special attention to the errors you learned about in the lesson, but look for other types of errors as well. You may write your edits directly into the essay.
I do not believe that there is anything wrong with the essay MuffinAlien wrote, but i suppose i wouldn't get a good grade if i didn't do much on this essay, so i'll try my best to fix it somehow.
Gothic writing is marked by the suspense of not knowing what will happen next in a story. Great Gothic writers like Edgar Allan Poe move beyond simple techniques to build suspense. His stories are more than the usual "It was a dark and stormy night." In his popular Gothic story, "The Black Cat," you can see Poe effectively using clear narrative choices to build suspense. How he holds back information and controlled pacing develops the narrator's character are both two good examples of how he does it.
Holding back information is the first way Poe builds suspense. As the story begins, the narrator is clearly addressing an audience. He says it in a way as if he knows us already. It says at the very beginning of the story, "But to-morrow I die, and to-day I will empty my soul." This statement is so extreme that anyone who would stumble onto these words would be attached, wondering what's going to happen next. None of the questions flowing through the reader's mind are answered until much later in the story. The now-curious reader must read along.
Along with this, Poe effectively controls the pacing of the story to which also builds suspense. Whenever the action becomes intense and the narrator becomes excited or violent, the sentences are either short or very choppy. For example, “...They left no nook or corner unexplored. At length, for the third or fourth time, they descended into the cellar. I trembled not in a muscle. My heart beats calmly as that of one who slumbers in innocence…” These sentences are short, direct, and choppy, creating more suspension. When Poe wants to create the illusion that time is passing more slowly; he uses longer and more complex sentences that must be read more carefully and slowly. For example, “To those who have cherished an affection for a faithful and wise dog, I need hardly be at the trouble of explaining the nature or the intensity of the satisfaction, therefore available. There is something in the unselfish and self-sacrificing love of a savage, which goes directly to the heart of him who has had frequent occasions to test the small friendship and cobweb loyalty of basic Man.” These sentences are very long, showing that time is passing very slowly.
Poe creates suspense in the story by using more complex tools and narrative choices than just setting the story on a stormy night in a haunted house or middle age castle. He holds back information and carefully controls the pacing. These narrative choices are so effective that we're still reading Poe's stories more than 150 years after they were first published.
Explanation:
This is what I wrote :)
I got this essay from another user on Brainly named MuffinAlien. She posted her essay under a different question, but it was the same topic.
Thank you MuffinAlien <3
Who stops Tybalt from attacking Romeo at the feast in Romeo and Juliet?
A. The Nurse
B. Benvolio
C. Capulet
D. Juliet
Answer:
Benvolio, B.
Explanation:
Benvolio is the one who stops Tybalt.
This is the notebook of Nam
The tool of the mason is heavy
She prepared the outfit of her children
The coat of the boy was torn
Mr. Van is the friend of Mr. Dong
The desks of the pupils are always clean
The windows of the house are green
The caps of the boys are on the shelves
He likes to read the poems of John Keats
The house of my mother-in-law is in the country
38. I use a cassette to practice listening skills.
→A cassette _______________________________________________________________________
39. I’m very keen on joining the rock concert next Sunday.
→I’m looking _____________________________________________________________________
42. Henry’s success is his parents’ pride.
Henry’s parents are ________________________________________________________________
Answer:
38. A cassette is useful for practicing listening skills.
39. I'm looking forward to joining the rock concert next Sunday.
42. Henry's parents are prideful because of his successes.
Explanation:
These are kind of weird sentences and I'm unsure of the objective of the assignment, hope this helps though!
Which is the right answer
Adverbial Clauses Of Concession
Answer:
B. I always get what I want
Explanation:
Those boys were excited about the new game in the beginning, but now they have ____ it.
A. looked after B. gone off C. filled in D. got on
Answer:
It's option B. gone off
Explanation:
Those boys were excited about the new game in the beginning, but now they have gone off it.
The rest of the three options sound and look grammatically incorrect, and this is the only correct one. Hope this helps.
Those boys were excited about the new game in the beginning, but now they have gone off it.
What motivates Odysseus to reveal his name and put his men in more danger?
anger and pride
gratitude and relief
weakness and fear
joy and excitement
Answer:
option A anger and pride
Explanation:
Odysseus proudly shouts his name while leaving cyclops's territory. He shouts his name loudly to torment cyclops which causes problems for him further. Hence, anger and pride motivate Odysseus to reveal his name and men in more danger.
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Describe the relationship between Bev and Ezze. Please HELPPP
Answer:
Maybe they are twins or siblings
The relationship between Bev and Ezze is described as friends who have common interests.
What is the central idea of the story Quiet town?The story "Quiet town" highlight the two central characters named Bev and Ezze around which the whole narrative revolves and illustrated the theme of Man vs. Nature through the adventurous journey.
The story concerns Bev and her son in their small village as they learn that the sea levels are advancing and that the seas would eventually bury them.
Bev and Ezze have been introduced to us in the build-up, so we are sufficiently immersed in the plot when we learn that the sea wall is flooding in the theme as nature vs men and the consequences they had faced.
The story indicates that Bev is forced to acknowledge the horrible truth by remaining with their peaceful residential village and adopting her late husband's disbelief of climate change. This sad conclusion is reached by her, Benji, and their elderly next-door neighbor Ezze.
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Write an informative essay on a Greek mythical character. Your essay will use research to summarize the plot
Solution :
Hercules
Hercules was considered equivalent to the Greek divine hero named Heracles, who was the son Jupiter. Hercules was well known in classical mythology for his strength and courage and also for his various far-ranging adventures.
In Greek mythology, Hercules was a mythical character. He was the son of Zeus, the God of thunder. He was seen as half man and half God. He was a man of immense power and strength. In the battle of Troy, Hercules defeated the greatest and strongest warrior in the battle field, Hector.
Hercules is considered the greatest of all Greek heroes.
In the story The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street how does the woman's description of les's activities increased tension and deepen the conflict?
Answer and Explanation:
Les Goodman is a character in the episode The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street, a graphic novel adapted from the 1959 Twilight Zone film. In the story, Les is suspected to be an alien because according to his neighbors he is quite the odd one. The suspicion is further skyrocketed by a woman's accusation, citing that she had often seen him standing at the garden alone at night looking up to the sky like he was waiting or looking for something.
COMPLETE THE SENTENCES. USE THE WORDS IN THE BOX.
-enough -too many -more -most -too much -not -not many -too -enough -too
1. He drinks __________________ coffee –it’s really unhealthy.
2. Sally is the ____________________ attractive girl in our class.
3. My dad doesn’t eat __________________ vegetables.
4. She’s overweight because she eats ______________________ hamburgers.
5. My brother is _____________________ extrovert than me.
6. My mum says I can’t go trekking in the Andes. It’s ________________ dangerous.
7. My sister’s only fourteen. She’s ___________________ old enough to fly by plane on her own.
8. We can’t go out yet. It’s ______________________ wet.
9. I bought some CDs, but _______________________.
10.I don’t do a lot of exercise, but I think I’m healthy ___________________.
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Select TWO sentences in the passage that best show that the narrator, Frederick Douglass, is fond of Mrs. Auld.
Excerpt from Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass by Frederick Douglass
" Very soon after I went to live with Mr. and Mrs. Auld, she very kindly commenced to teach me the A, B, C. After I had learned this, she assisted me in learning to spell words of three to four letters. Just at this point of my progress, Mr. Auld found out what was going on, and at once forbade Mrs. Auld to instruct me any further, telling her, among other things, that it was unlawful, as well as unsafe, to teach a slave to read. . . . "Now," said he, "if you teach that [slave] (speaking of myself) how to read, there would be no keeping him as it would forever unfit him to be a slave. He would at once become unmanageable, and of no value to his master. As to himself, it could do him no good, but a great deal of harm. It would make him discontented and unhappy."
BEST (CORRECT) ANSWER GETS BRAILIEST.
Answer:
Mrs. Auld to instruct me any further, telling her, among other things, that it was unlawful, as well as unsafe,
Explanation:
As to himself, it could do him no good, but a great deal of harm. It would make him discontented and unhappy."
Answer:
Mrs. Auld, she very kindly commenced to teach me the A, B, C. After I had learned this, she assisted me in learning to spell words of three to four letters.
Explanation:
mrs. Aulds teaching abc’s was nurturing or “Kind” this implies she was kind and he was responsive to her demeanor as we can infer when someone is kind to us, we too, become fond of that person. The second sentence describes mrs auld as being helpful in assisting f. Douglas. . . Again when people are kind and helpful towards another, it is usually well received and reciprocated.
NEED ASAP (BRAINLIEST FOR BEST ANSWER) Compare the two articles below again, and then answer the questions that follow.
In your own words, evaluate the objectivity of each article. Where can you see the authors’ personal biases? Where can you see an objective delivery of facts? What is the central message of each article?
Answer:
The author is really bias and on Clifford High School side, the actual facts are in the argument that happened.
Explanation:
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Answer:
The journalist for Clifford is more biased for their team, whereas the journalist for Waterford was more factual.
Explanation:
In the news clipping for Clifford High, the journalist explained the situation from the game poorly. They also gave an unacceptable amount of blind praise to their home team and used informal language to express their thoughts on the matter. The journalist for Waterford gave a more detailed and factual recollection of the incident. They managed to state the events as they presumably happened, and they did not show their opinions and biases.
Which character is the antagonist in this excerpt from “The Story of the Old Man Who Made Withered Trees to Flower” by Yei Theodora Ozaki?
Answer:
the antagonist is the dog master's neighbour, because he killed the master's precious animal only because he believed the dog behaved badly.
Question 1 You must answer this question You received an email from your friend, Oscar who is interested to buy some gems.(pew) Hi, My mother's birthday is almost here. I am thinking of getting a gemstone for her birthday. Which jewellery shop should I go to and how do I choose a gemstone jewellery for her. Could you come along and help? I will be waiting eagerly for your reply. Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below.
Answer:
I hope you know the format
Explanation:
Hey! Wow it's your mother's birthday and you are buying her a gemstone. GREAT CHOICE. Well if you ask me which shop you should go in I would prefer Thomson's jewelry shop. He sells gemstones at reasonable prices and the gemstones at his shop are worth buying. Ask your mother her favourite colour and give her the same coloured gemstone.
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give an explanation of tundra
How much time do you spend .....TV every day ?
A watch
B to watch
C watching
D in watching
Answer:
C. watching is the answer. Hope it helps you^_^
Explanation:
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Read the excerpt from act 3, scene 2, of Julius Caesar.
[ANTONY.] But here’s a parchment with the seal
of Caesar;
I found it in his closet. 'Tis his will.
Let but the commons hear this testament—
Which, pardon me, I do not mean to read—
And they would go and kiss dead Caesar’s wounds,
And dip their napkins in his sacred blood,
Yea, beg a hair of him for memory,
And, dying, mention it within their wills,
Bequeathing it as a rich legacy
Unto their issue.
What is the best summary of this monologue?
Antony incites anger in the people by displaying and reading Caesar’s will to show how rich Caesar has become as the leader of Rome.
Antony suggests that the people go to Caesar’s body to take relics to show their disrespect and dislike for Caesar.
Antony displays Caesar’s will and says that if the people read it, they would worship Caesar so much that they would want something from him to worship as a relic.
Antony has Caesar’s will and reads it to the crowd even though it offers further evidence of Caesar’s ambition and greed will upset the people even more.
Answer:
Antony displays Caesar’s will and says that if the people read it, they would worship Caesar so much that they would want something from him to worship as a relic.
Explanation:
Antony displays Caesar’s will and says that if the people read it, they would worship Caesar so much that they would want something from him to worship as a relic. This is the best summary of this monologue. Hence C is correct.
What is summery ?A summary is a concise narrative or memory of the key points of a piece of writing, activity, or event. It usually eliminates unnecessary information, staying brief and to the point. There are several strategies for summarising that might help youngsters remember significant portions of a section of literature. This talent is perfect for older children's assignment or examination preparation, but it is also a helpful skill that will make communication more confident and clear.
A summary, brief, digest, or synopsis is a concise version of a lengthier work. A summary is a concise statement or repeat of major themes, usually at the end of a work: a chapter summary.
Hence C is correct.
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essay:the best time of the year
Answer:
A Little Christmas DinnerChristmas is the time of year renowned for bringing families together in a way no other holiday can quite muster up to. Family togetherness feels like a cup of hot chocolate on the first cold night of the year; heart warming. That magical day when relatives flock from all over to be in one house, at one table, and to eat one meal, nothing is more special than a little Christmas dinner.
Christmas is known for coming quicker and quicker each passing year. Many people begin to silently panic as soon as they hear the first Christmas song on the radio. To me it strikes into my head that our yearly family Christmas dinner is ever so close. As a child I enjoyed the Christmas dinner but not for the wholesome heart warming reasons that echo through my words now, but for the greedy natured presents. Admittedly the presents still are a highlight of the Christmas dinner, but after a few seasoned years of learning that Christmas is not about materialistic items I now feel that the Christmas dinner is the best part of this day.
Every year we have the dinner at my grand parent’s quant house in the country. It takes a few hours to get there, but the country ride is more mesmerizing than any movie that I have ever seen. The twists and turns on a single lane road surrounded by tree’s help set the tone for what the day will bring. Every year I am always the first one there to help my grandparents to set up. The first thing I always remember to do is hug each one of them for as long as I can, thankful for another year to take in their open arms.
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Summer;
Thesis statement: Summer is often the least stressful and most relaxed time of the year.
Explain what you do with free time and hobbies
Pleasant weather
Less stress over school
Explanation:
How will a writer's decision to use a first-person narrator impact the story?
1.It will prevent the writer from setting the story in the past.
2.It will push the writer to center the story on a conflict that is external and between other characters rather than one that is internal to the narrator.
3.It will make it impossible for the writer to include flashbacks in the story's plot.
4.It will force the writer to use descriptions of the other characters' actions and their dialogue to reveal or suggest their thoughts, feelings, and motivations.
Explanation:
1.It will prevent the writer from setting the story in the past.
Complete each sentence with one of these verbs : answer, apply, lie, make, try, walk, wash, write, wait, wear.
If you write out the sentences I'll help you answer it
how to write" the pups fur was fluffier than their mothers' fur" in the. correct sentence form
Answer:
The pups' fur was fluffier than their mother's fur.
Explanation:
How does Kafka use the order of words within sentences to create emphasis?
Answer:
They are compassionate, sympathetic, and worldwide relationships that individuals have.
Explanation:
This is what first prompted Gregor's sister to be compassionate toward him, but because it is a "human" link, she eventually came to the conclusion that he was no longer human and the compassion ceased as well.
Rice is always the most important______in most Asian countries
A.crop B.tree C.root D.herb
Answer:
Crop
Explanation:
In most rice producing Asian countries, rice is seen as an important cash crop mainly grown for exportation to non producing countries of the rest of the world.
Write a letter to the principal of your school suggesting at least three ways to improve English speaking in the school
Answer:
To,
The principal,
School name,
Place Name,
Date,
Subject:Sir/Madam,
I am writing to put your mind on the poor English spoken by the students of the school. The students of our school are quite poor in English and they feel shy when they speak infront of a large crowd.
I am writing this to inform gou you that if won't took any important decision in this case the reputation of the school will be damaged, you can organize summer camp, extra classes or some type of quiz to encourage students to improve their vocabulary and english.
I shall be thankful if you would look in this case
YOURS OBEDIENTLY/SINCERELY
NAME
I HOPE THIS WILL HELP YOUHAVE A GREAT DAY :)
please answer b and check if the others are correct too.
Answer:
Very.
Explanation:
It was such a very funny film it made me roar with laughter .
I think this might help you.
I come from a city that is located in the southern part of the country.
Answer:
TEXAS
Explanation:
IT IS LOCATED IN THE SOUTH OF THE UNITED STATES.
1. Half the world's rain forests have already been ___________.
a. endangered b. eroded c. found d. destroyed
2. Try to eliminate fatty foods from your diet.
a. limit b. get rid of c. move d. add
3. Acid rain has caused severe _______ on the hillside.
a. erosion b. pollution c. destruction d. floods
4. This channel allows rainwater to run off.
a. keep inside b. move around c. flow into d. flow out of
5. A large hydroelectric __________was built on the River Danube.
a. power b. dam c. bank d. wall
6. Water can be held on the land by vegetation.
a. plants and trees b. grown trees c. the growth of plantsd. plants used as food
7. _________air makes people unpleasant to breathe.
a. Pollute b. Pollution.
c. Polluted d. Polluting
Answer:
1. Destroyed
2. Get rid of
3. floods
4. Flow out of
5. dam
6. Plants and trees
7. Polluted
I have to put which is the 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th
This picnic left a deep impression in our mind
At noon, the students started cooking
On Saturday morning, under the leadership of the teacher, we went to the beach for a picnic
After the hard work of the classmates, the picnic is finally a good son
Just like that, we ran to the sea
Along the way, the students talked and laughed and were very happy.
Answer:
On Saturday morning, under the leadership of the teacher, we went to the beach for a picnic.
Along the way, the students talked and laughed and were very happy.
At noon, the students started cooking.
Just like that, we ran to the sea.
After the hard work of the classmates, the picnic is finally a good son.
This picnic left a deep impression in our mind.
who is the president of sri lanka?
Answer:
the president of Sri Lanka is Gotabaya Rajapaksa
