Answer: 2 and 3
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Revising and editing are the two tasks you undertake to significantly improve your essay. Both are very important elements of the writing process. You may think that a completed first draft means that little improvement is needed. However, even experienced writers need to improve their drafts and rely on peers during revising and editing. You may know that athletes miss catches, fumble balls, or overshoot goals. Dancers forget steps, turn too slowly, or miss beats. For both athletes and dancers, the more they practise, the stronger their performance will become. Web designers seek better images, a more clever design, or a more appealing background for their web pages. Writing has the same capacity to profit from improvement and revision.
You should revise and edit in stages: do not expect to catch everything in one go. If each time you review your essay you focus on a different aspect of construction, you will be more likely to catch any mistakes or identify any issues. Throughout this chapter, you will see a number of checklists containing specific things to look for with each revision. For example, you will first look at how the overall paper and your ideas are organized.
In the second section of this chapter, you will focus more on editing: correcting the mechanical issues. Also at the end of the chapter, you will see a comprehensive but more general list of things you should be looking for.
Understanding the Purpose of Revising and Editing
Revising and editing allow you to examine two important aspects of your writing separately, so that you can give each task your undivided attention.
When you revise, you take a second look at your ideas. You might add, cut, move, or change information in order to make your ideas clearer, more accurate, more interesting, or more convincing.
When you edit, you take a second look at how you expressed your ideas. You add or change words. You fix any problems in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. You improve your writing style. You make your essay into a polished, mature piece of writing, the end product of your best efforts.
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How do you get the best out of your revisions and editing? Here are some strategies that writers have developed to look at their first drafts from a fresh perspective. Try them throughout the writing process; then keep using the ones that bring results.
Take a break. You are proud of what you wrote, but you might be too close to it to make changes. Set aside your writing for a few hours or even a day until you can look at it objectively.
Ask someone you trust for feedback and constructive criticism.
Pretend you are one of your readers. Are you satisfied or dissatisfied? Why?
For many people, the words critic, critical, and criticism provoke only negative feelings that make them blush, grumble, or shout. However, as a writer and a thinker, you need to learn to be critical of yourself in a positive way and have high expectations for your work. You also need to train your eye and trust your ability to fix what needs fixing. To do this, you need to teach yourself where to look.
Revising Your Paper: Organization, Cohesion, and Unity
When writing a research paper, it is easy to become overly focused on editorial details, such as the proper format for bibliographical entries. These details do matter. However, before you begin to address them, it is important to spend time reviewing and revising the content of the paper.
A good research paper is both organized and cohesive. Organization means that your argument flows logically from one point to the next. Cohesion means that the elements of your paper work together smoothly and naturally. In a cohesive research paper, information from research is seamlessly integrated with the writer’s ideas.
Order the values from least to greatest.
Answer:
=5/10 =0.27 =2.7
The tables show the numbers of white and yellow flowers Cara and Hector used in 5 different arrangements.
Cara’s Flower Arrangements
White 3 6 9 12 15
Yellow 5 10 15 20 25
Hector’s Flower Arrangements
White 4 8 12 16 20
Yellow 6 10 14 18 22
Part A
Are the numbers of white and yellow flowers in Cara’s arrangements proportional?
Which equation relates the number of white flowers, w, to the number of yellow flowers, y?
Yes; y=35w
Yes; y=53w
No; y=3w+5w
No; y=5+3w
Part B
Are the numbers of white and yellow flowers in Hector’s arrangements proportional?
Which equation relates the number of white flowers, h, to the number of yellow flowers, e?
Yes; e=32h
Yes; e=23h
No; e=h+2
No; e=h−2
Answer:
Part A
Yes, there is a proportional relationship in Cara's. For every 5 yellow flowers, there are 3 white flowers. 5:3. I didn't see an equation that would work for the equation in the question. The equation I found on my own would be 5w/3 = y
Part B
There is no proportional relationship in Hector's. The equation would be e=h-2.
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if x=12 then y=180. What is the value of x when y=360?
Answer:
X = 24
Step-by-step explanation:
y = 180 in relation to y = 360 would be 180 x 2
So you would take 12 and multiply by 2 and you would get your answer of x= 24
Answer:
x=24
Step-by-step explanation:
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Andrew uses the equation 25(x−4)=30x, where x represents the number of sales, to determine the number of items he needs to sell to break even. Which statement is true about the equation?
A.There are infinitely many solutions.
B.There are two solutions because there are two variables.
C.There is no solution because sales cannot be negative.
D.There is one solution because there is only one variable representing the sales.
Answer:
b
Step-by-step explanation:
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There are 8 bones in a large snake for every 3 bones in a small snake. The small snake has 150 bones. How many bones does the large snake have?
Answer:
4000
Step-by-step explanation:
150/3 =50
50 x 80 = 4000
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The sum of three consecutive numbers is 72. What is the largest of these numbers? (1 point)
Select one:
a. 23
b. 25
c. 26
d. 28
Answer:
Step-by-step explanation:
B.25
Since the Hargrove’s younger daughter hadn’t taken part in the mathematical deliberations about the candy to purchase, she was selected to go to the store to buy the family’s Halloween candy. Being less mathematically compulsive than the rest of the family, she really couldn’t care less about how many grams of chocolate and nuts are in the candy. She figured she needed to buy at least 90 pieces of candy so she wouldn’t have to share with her brother and sister like last year. She also knew that her father wasn’t going to give her more than $24. When she got to the store, she saw that Twix-or-Tweats came in bags of 20 bars that cost $6 each. Batterfingers came in bags of 15 bars that cost $3 each.
Answer:
Maya Brown-Zimmerman and her family of six never miss out on trick-or-treating in Cleveland.
Given the ratio of 8 ounces to 1 cup, how many ounces are in 4 cups?
An engineer is planning to construct triangular halls on a new construction site. A scale model of the engineer's triangular halls is shown to the left. Each unit represents 10 feet. Which of the following statements are true about this scale model? Select three statements that apply.
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Answer: b c e
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A diver was at 28 feet (ft) below sea level. Five minutes later she dove an additional 37.5 ft down. Which point best represents the diver’s final elevation relative to sea level
An art club sells 42 large candles and 56 small candles.
Write and simplify an expression that represents the profit.
expression for the profit:
simplified expression for the profit:
A large candle costs $5, and a small candle costs $3. What is the club’s profit?
club's profit:
The sum of 3 consecutive odd integers is 219. What is the larger integer?
The sum of 3 consecutive integers is 117. What is the largest integer?
The sum of 3 consecutive even integers is 156. What is the smallest integer?
Answer:
75
Step-by-step explanation:
71, 73, and 75 equal 219
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Answer:
2nd one
Step-by-step explanation:
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Answer:453
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Mrs. Williams spent a total of $175 when she went Black Friday shopping. If the original price of the items she purchased was $437.50, what percent discount did she receive?
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Answer:
2.5%
Step-by-step explanation:
Answer:
2.5% is the answer
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Adam can eat 3/8 of a pizza in 1/16 of a minute complete the unit rate by setting up a complex fraction and simplifying Answers A) 1 pizza per minute B) 3 Pizza per minute C) 6 Pizza per minute D) 9 Pizza per minute Answer correctly and i will give away a giftcard
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Simplify the expression.
5(z+4)+5(2-z)
Answer:30
Step-by-step explanation:
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The required value of the expression 5(z+4)+5(2-z) after simplification is given as 30.
What is simplification?The process in mathematics to operate and interpret the function to make the function or expression simple or more understandable is called simplifying and the process is called simplification.
Here,
Given expression,
= 5(z+4)+5(2-z)
Apply the distributive property,
= 5z + 20 + 10 - 5z
Adding the alike terms
= 5z - 5z + 20 + 10
= 30
Thus, the required simplified value of the given expression is given as 30 after simplification.
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What is 33/4 as a mixed number(fraction)?
8 1/4.
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The two dot plots below show the heights of some sixth graders and some seventh graders:
The mean absolute deviation (MAD) for the first set of data is 1.2 and the MAD for the second set of data is 1.7. Approximately how many times the variability in the heights of the sixth graders is the variability in the heights of the seventh graders? (Round all values to the tenths place.)
Answer:
I think the mean is 54.5
Step-by-step explanation:
Answer:
i think the mean would be 53
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An albatross is a large bird that can fly 400 kilometers in 8 hours at a constant speed. Using d for distance in kilometers and t for number of hours, an equation that represents this situation is d = 50t .
1. What are two constants of proportionality for the relationship between distance in kilometers and number of hours? What is the relationship between these two values?
2. Write another equation that relates d and t in this context.
Answer:
0.0.2 i think is the constant of proportionality
Step-by-step explanation:
{2(2x+1)}{5} -{x+2}{2}={1}{5}
Answer:
x-17/19
Step-by-step explanation:
Answer:
x-17/19
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Consider the following table of values for the function f(x). Determine the average rate of change over the interval [B,D].
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1 - 2 = -1 this should help
3 2
----- + - ----- in simplest form??
5 7
Answer:
Okay so 32/57 is actually the simplest form it can go to.
Step-by-step explanation:
So the GCD of 32 and 57 is 1.
so divide both the top numerator and the bottom denominator by the GCD
32 divide 1
57 divide 1
still equals to 32/57
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Answer:
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Books at a library sale are sold for $3.50 each. A function, y = 3.50x can be used to generate an input/output table for this scenario. Which statement is true about an accurate graph of this data?
The data is continuous, so it does not matter whether or not the points are in a line.
The data is discrete, so the graph is a series of unconnected points.
The data is continuous, so the graph is a series of unconnected points.
The data is discrete, so the points are connected with a line.
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Answer:
A is the right choice
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Answer:
the answer is A also this The data is discrete, so the graph is a series of unconnected points
Step-by-step explanation:
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Darlene wants to buy a sweater that originally cost $48. It is on sale for 35% off. Sales tax is 8%. What is the final price of the sweater with tax?
$28.70
$47.73
$33.70
$56.16
Answer:
$33.70
Step-by-step explanation:
The sweater costs $48. It is on sale for 35% off. The sales tax is 8%. We want to know the final price.
We know that 35% is the same as 0.35. We are going to multiply $48 by 0.35. This results in $16.80. The 35% is 35% off, so we are going to subtract $16.80 from the $48. This gives us $31.20. Now, we still have the 8% sales tax. 8% is the same as 0.08. We will multiply this by $31.20. This gives us $2.496, which we can round to $2.50. That is how much the sales tax is. It will be added to the price of the sweater. The result is $33.70.
Answer: I'd say you can eliminate option 56.16 and maybe go with 33.70
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